As many have probably guessed I'm new so I'm still getting used to the community and such. In my hastiness/excitement I posted my pseudo-brainchild SCP-673 "The Disorder Machine" to the series page far earlier than I should have. To that end, in a move I perhaps should have taken before posting it I humbly request assistance from the forum on how I can make this idea a little bit better and see if I can pull it out of the reject pile and into acceptable/interesting range.
To note: I'm definitely aware that it resembles SCP-192 so the first order of business for me personally is to give it enough degrees of seperation to make it significantly different. Yoric mentioned in the comments that the style was a bit too vanilla so the cure to that is to make it a lot more interesting (preferribly I'd like to ramp up the creepy factor). I have a few half-formed ideas brewing around in my mind but I'd love to hear from the community what they think can be done.
Any feedback on how I can save this one would be greatly appreciated, thanks guys.
Slight Edit: Again, I have to give thanks to Drewbear for the help during the first edit earlier.