Yup. This is the first bit of a new Tale. Click on it.
Date: 18 Jul 2011 05:35
Number of posts: 3
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I love this already. Some of the content is a little cliched, (as your narrator is aware) but style gets an A+, and great style is an excellent way to get away with almost anything. And nice detail work:
From the looks of the spray of blood I glimpsed before I passed out, the whole row's legs went with it, like they'd been cut by God's own invisible scalpel.
Erp. I'm hooked.
(Also: I'm assuming the typos are intentional given the narrative conceit.)