Hey, this is my first SCP, so I wanted a lot of help in making it worthy of gracing this site:
(that's just a working title. I'll change it later)
Any constructive criticism is welcomed. You're even welcome to insult my writing skills, as long as you let me know how to improve!
A few things I already know:
I repeated a lot of words, so any suggestions of synonyms would be lovely.
I worded a few phrases awkwardly, but I'm having a hard time reconstructing them.
I made an audio recording of my SCP. I know that hand drawn images are a "no" here, but I was wondering if my own audio would be appropriate. If so, I would love to know how to link it to the page. I feel as though it adds a nice touch, but I made it so I guess I'm biased. No, it's not me talking normally; that wouldn't be creepy. I added a lot of effects to make it sounds haunting, although it does borderline with cheesy.
Anyway, thank you for your time!