Well hey there! I've set myself up a page on the SCP sandbox and put together a draft of an SCP idea i've had for a couple of days now called 'The Jar of hairs'. I'd appreciate some feedback of course, so here's the link if ye be interested: http://sandbox.scp-wiki.net/unclejoe
The things I'm most concerned about with this are;
- Sounding somewhat redundant in places.
- Not being convincing as a report.
- Not explaining the phenomena properly.
I'm sure you all would be a better judge of these things than I would. Still in the process of making small edits here and there, and like I said it's an early draft, but I feel it's best to catch any problems early on.
I plan on writing a number of logs to accompany this article as well. A log detailing many of the original SCP-XXX-1 samples that had noteworthy recordings, experiments conducted by the foundation with SCP-XXX-2 used in a variety of situations, and explanations of what happened with any misc. items that were placed into the jar, such as notes, candy, cigarettes, or anything else I think would make for an interesting read. Maybe some further exploration of the SCP when used via VHS, but i'm not sure if that would be it's own log or not.
So yeah, go ahead and let me know what you think, what I did wrong, what I did right, what you think could be added, subtracted, reworded, etc.