Can't tell if this violates SCP Overdone Cliche #10 or not. Lemme know.
There isn't enough meat in it to be a full SCP. It could work as an anomalous item, though.
A porn/slasher snuff movie with a compulsion at the end to become a serial killer?
I encourage people who put work into things to keep trying. I also believe that to write well, first you have to write not so well. In fact, you have to write a LOT of not so well.
Keep writing. You seem to be doing a lot better at the technical stuff then some of the people that have been here a long time. You just need to find your "voice"
So do I read this as a general consensus that the writing is good but the idea is less so?
I am a person, not a group. My psychiatrist says so about us and those voices in my head tell me to agree with him.
I talked to some people on chat. One thought it was kewl, one thought it was less so (in fact, said almost the exact thing you did, where he quoted the simple plot of the SCP, which I think means "what the fuck is that about?"). Moreover, since nobody else has commented, I assumed everyone just agreed with you.
I think you could make object 1 into a solid article. I don't think it trips on #10, but it does stumble a little on #11. But you save it with the additional effects on people. It still needs some work, I don't like the compulsion bit just because compulsion is overdone and I'm vanilla on it feeding off human targets, but there is a foundation for a lasting scp here.
For Object 2, I especially like the sexual perference changes at the end. I was expecting sexual-violence tendencies, but this sort of imprinting based on the presumed wife just feels right. Still, seems like there is something lacking. I can't put my finger on it. Possibly could use some hints about the camera-person/killer. I'm imagining it was the guys wife, but maybe it's something a bit more supernatural and fitting with the audio anomalies. Just a few hints, because spelling it out might kill the effect.
I'm going to edit Object 2 to make it a bit angrier (based on advice received in chat). I'm not sure how to make the edits for #1 work without involving compulsion. I can work on the specifically human parts, though (I was going to make it humans and animals, but I thought making it exclusively humans added onto the creep factor.
Any comments on Object #4? That's the one nobody's said anything bad about, and I'm thinking about posting it soon.
Object 4 is pretty interesting. I feel like I want just a little more something, though. Maybe a little more of a hint of what the chips are doing rather than "I have a hunch they're communicating still."
Object 1: It's… alright. The compulsion stuff is overdone. Also, this would make a terrible anomalous item, because it would theoretically be interesting enough to the Foundation to merit full SCP status. Yes, it would make a potentially interesting entry to that list (especially if you kept the way it affects organics), but it doesn't belong there unless you drastically weaken its effects to the point where they're silly/insignificant. If you cut the compulsion and add some more interesting stuff, this could work. Maybe add some kind of story to it.
Object 2: This is better than I would have expected had someone told me the concept. I think it could work. Bonus points if the mysterious unseen killer was not the killer's wife (but was still aware of the cheating). (Not required for me to like it, though.)
Object 3: This might need some tweaking, but I generally like it.
Object 4: This is interesting. Probably interesting enough for posting, actually.
Moose, he already posted object 4. It's pretty good.