I have put off finishing and posting this for almost all of Game Day because I am convinced it is terrible. This is at least partially because I am a neurotic fuck, but perhaps partially because it really is terrible. Now that I can't put it off any longer, please disabuse, or, uh, abuse me of that notion.
Oh, and if this sticks, I really want to merge the plotline with someone else's plotline. Collaboration yaaay. But first I wanna know if it's crap or not.
EDIT: Almost two years later… this is almost certainly the weakest piece I've ever written. I still might fix it, so feel free to still leave comments, but… eh. We'll see.