Upvoted earlier, but isn't it a furpile rather than yiffpile?
Date: 19 Oct 2011 19:00
Number of posts: 10
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Ha, wow. I know this is an SCP, just don't know which one off the top of my head.
Well done though.
I feel the need to make this edit, I'm confused at why a fat man would claim a "furry convention" is a family oriented event when it is clearly not as such.
I liked this until the bits about the holocaust tour and "then the madness began". Then the narm made me giggle, and I downvoted it.
Clef, I know damn well you can do better than this, man. Where's the subtlety? This is to horror what getting punched in the face with a fistful of bloody steak is to hunger; gory, unpleasant, and not at all what I ordered.
gory, unpleasant, and not at all what I ordered.
Then I succeeded.
At being narmy, yeh. If you were going for that, you hit it, but you're one of the few authors here who can do action scenes really well, and that was just not it.
Let me clarify: Gory and Unpleasant I am aiming for. Narm, not so much. I'll take a second look at it when I have some distance.