Aside from an opinion request, I am also doing this to ensure I get the formatting correctly. I am still looking for a photo of a pull tab ticket to use.
Aside from a basic "suck" test and possible grammar foul-ups, I wonder a couple things:
1) Should I detail exactly how deceased die, or does leaving it [REDACTED] work,
2) The notes (which I still need to figure out the formatting to put them into the little box): Reasonable? Matches the tone of the modern SCP Foundation (Serious, with a little amusement)?
Hope it's enjoyable, and if not, help me make it so. Cheers.
Do not post works in progress in the forums. :) Thanks. -Troy