This is my first SCP. Tell me what you guys think, but please try to be constructive. I've had this idea a while, and I wanted to run it by the community.
Excerpts from 'How to write a SCP'
Humanoid SCPs tend to suffer from some common weaknesses, collectively known as the "X-Man Syndrome". Basically, it means that there is a fine line between a humanoid SCP and a comic-book superhero.
Before you post your humanoid SCP, look down the list below: if you answer "yes" to a large number of these questions, you are probably writing an X-Man, not a humanoid SCP, and should make changes as necessary.
Is it a human? (Duh.)
Is it young and attractive? (There is a dearth of ugly, middle-aged humanoid SCPs.)
Is it one of the nice guys?
Does it work for the Foundation in one of the Mobile Task Forces?
Would you want to be this SCP? (If the thought of being this SCP does not fill you with dread, then you're probably doing it wrong.)
Just trying to be helpful.
'Tis an X-Man, and is neither interesting or funny.
Sorry to say, but I see no salvaging it.
I think I've removed the X-man features by giving it more animal-like physical qualities, increasing it's aggression, and removing it's sapience, but if you see no salvaging it, I'll post my next idea as soon as I have it! Thanks you guys for the help!