Well as the first attempt of mine was a complete and abysmal failure, I did manage to learn a lot from it. Therefore, before even trying to post an all new SCP before it is even reviewed, I would appreciate a little critique as of now.
I'm looking for things in the way of:
How original do you find this?
What are your thoughts as to how it is progressing?
Anything you would like to see in the final draft?