It's flawed, I know. I'd like some feedback though, and maybe some ideas of how to revise it, specifically I want there to be more weight/ consequence to encountering this thing.
Thanks for your time.
I really hate anything that "cannot be contained".
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I saw. I don't really understand how it could be contained, though. I had an idea that they could somehow trap it within the subject… "she would live a horrible existence but at least it would be contained" sort of deal. It would just take another addendum. the whole point was to have this not really be worth containing unit it started [DATA EXPUNGED] the subject, at which point they would realize that it was extremely dangerous and take the necessary precautions.
The SCP is now containable… I nearly doubled the size of this post, and I think the results are a much more effective SCP. Please read and give feedback, I think I really did a good job this time.