Hi everybody, I've just finished a draft of the second of my first two SCP articles, and I wanted to get some feedback on them and hopefully improve on them a bit before I try and throw them into the deep end.
The first one is called 'Things You Don't Want Coming Out of Your Shower'. This is a working title obviously. If anyone has any suggestions for another title, I am open. I am kind of leaning towards 'Mercurial Shower' at the moment, but that could change. This one has a small test log hidden by a collapsible.
The second one is 'The Perfect Sphere'. It was a result of Bright's challenge to take two overdone cliches and mash them together. So it is a sphere what makes you go crazy.
Both of these were written with less than a day between conception and writing. I've tweaked the shower a bit since I wrote it on Monday, but the Sphere I just finished. I am fairly happy with the shower, but I will probably do some more editing on the Sphere. I especially want to know if the Sphere is a good idea even worth improving/submitting as it is one of my first and it is comprised of cliches.