Could use some feedback on the two "wip" drafts.
Both need some spell-checking and tweaking for more formal language. I like both, although the 'ghost space ship' is somewhat similar to a few other SCPs I've seen.
Removed redactions from the containment procedures and cleaned up some of the ones in the description, how does it look now?
I also changed some of the language in The Semivisible Man to make it seem more formal.
I really like the orbital one. Is the displacement caused by the shuttle traveling at the speed of light? Correct me if I'm wrong on that. The idea of an orbiter that vastly exceeds our current technological capabilities is interesting, though. The clinical tone is spot-on, too.