Now I'm not neccesarily expecting too many people to involve themselves here (given that there's been a recent massive influx of help requets), but in the past all of the aricles I've written which I haven't put up here tended to be terrible in ways I couldn't see. So I am, of course, not too confident in my latest work. Here's the article, and any feedback would be much appreciated (don't feel the need to be polite).
EDIT: That link is currently down, as I'm rewriting the article. I'll make sure to post here when I'm done with that.