Hey guys, its been a while, isn't it? Well, I came with this little draft of mine.
It's still on the early stage, so expect more revision. Tell me what you think of it.
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Interesting idea. I'm not really sure what the man in chains has to do with the island or the wall, though - you'll need something to tie those together more concretely.
On a minor note, a wall 68 meters high would be taller than the Great Wall of China, the Statue of Liberty, or most of the Egyptian pyramids. I'd say tone it down a little and emphasize the magical we-can't-see-what's-behind-it field.
"an alloy of iron and copper alloy."
Seems a little awkward, try finding a different word for the second 'alloy'.
"unexplained anomalous visual distortion over the said area all observers experiences."
hmm, "unexplained visual distortion over the area that all observers experience" has a better feel to it.
"However, audio equipment picked up variety of noises from within the enclosure, ranging from distorted laughter to incomprehensible murmur."
I could be mistaken but shouldn't it be 'murmurs'?
"sandstone common in SCP-DDDD."
Maybe "sandstone common to SCP-DDDD."
Just some minor things like that, it also seems to be somewhat religious in nature, could you tweak it to maybe be a more alien phenomenon? I have nothing against religious SCPs it just seems like there are already so many.
Sorry about the typos, grammar error, and awkward phrasing. I just fart this out to get the content out of the way, see?
And you must be a clairvoyance, since I am basing this on a religious mythos, one that doesn't get used as much in SCP foundation (Hopefully I can pull this off). Not gonna tell you which one but here's a hit: not Scientology.