What's up guys? I'm working on my second SCP and I'd really like it if some people could look it over. Draft is "A Recording"
Essentially, the more the recording is watched, the more conscious the "persons" inside it become. The recording is mutable so what started as a mere curiosity watching the same game have so many different outcomes has devolved into a Lord of the Flies-type situation set in the TD garden.
It still needs a lot of work and I plan to add a timeline as well. I'd appreciate it if someone could advise me about the concept, any tone hiccups, word choice, and the more technical aspects if need be.
Thank you and enjoy.