Okay, love the concept there.
1) What's O-level personnel? Also, rather than modules 101 and 102 i'd have it simply say SCP-XXXX operation training.
Products of the machine are only to be used following a ███ result from a medical examiner, and development of superior samples is to be conducted only with O-Level authorisation.
First, redactions in containment procedures are dumb.. but then , I fail to see what was redacted. What relevant result from a medical examiner can be summarised in four characters?!
Experimentation with other existing projects shows that, prior to seizure by the Foundation, the previous operator had programmed a number of different organs into the device, including a heart, liver, gall bladder and numerous attempts at writing kidneys in varying stages of completion and correctness.
Love this bit.
Addendum ####-03: New TSG 5-8 investigation has revealed the existence of previously undiscovered 'code libraries' in the backend of the development software. These 'code libraries' are written in a low-level code that would appear to be a type of machine code. By manipulating the strings within these files, initial experimentation has revealed that it is possible to hand-code DNA structures that will be used by the machine in the formation of new organs. TSG 5-8 have begun debug procedures on the libraries and are publishing progress reports on a weekly basis. The application process to join TSG 5-9 'Dolly Mods' is now open to scientific and technical staff with expertise in non-human genetics.
This sounds slightly wrong from computer talk POV… but better ask someone more knowing than I am. Still like the implications.
What this needs is a few code examples with results.Both working organs, and messups.. if you describe them well this could be a good , strong entry.