Hi. Any and all feedback on my new SCP draft is appreciated.
It's on my sandbox under Stalker SCP.
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So it's the Slender Man as an SCP? Pass.
The core concept of an incorporeal stalker that only the victim can perceive is an interesting one, but this needs a LOT of work to stop it coming off as derivative.
Hmmm, I suppose they are somewhat similar. I didn't have slender man in mind when I made this, I just tried to write out an idea I found creepy.
Although, slender man and many other humanoid monsters have similar characteristics as a lot of people find weirdly proportioned humanoids scary.
There's another one almost exactly like this one, and it's pulled off much better.
I have a draft for a factory SCP on my sandbox at the moment. http://sandbox.scp-wiki.net/zekky
Any feedback would be appreciated. Thanks.