Article: http://sandbox.scp-wiki.net/dr-somnus
Some feedback from the chat helped me improve the article, looking for more critique here.
Check Revision 27 to see a (very poorly written) interview/audio log I had included before.
Check here for an extra image I had also previously included.
Do you think it would add to the article to bring back an improved version of the interview or re-add the image?
Looking for general thoughts on the article in its current state.
Thanks in advance.
Oh goodness. I have to admit, you're joke SCP made me laugh! Well done sir, well done indeed! X)
As for the first one. I have to admit, for all the articles of clothing on this site I've never personally seen footwear. That's points for originality right there. I'd say beef it up a little bit, but you've got yourself a solid idea right there.
Thanks! I've submitted a rewritten version here: SCP-1600. I'm rewriting this again in my sandbox.
As for that joke one, not sure if I'll ever submit it for fear of being eaten alive by the Senior Staff.
- You need to point the arrow more exactly for better effect.
- The name in the middle detracts as it's all lowercase (for me) in the middle of UPPERCASE SCREAMING!
- You couldn't find a shark to mount the fricken laser to?
I like it! My only suggestion is to include a test log or two about the grisly deaths/awesome rewards that awaited those who did/n't +1.
Thanks! Was just thinking of including some chainletter-esque element in this.