It seems too short to me and also lacking…something. But I don't have anything else to add really. Any help would be appreciated, especially in the list.
please, don't post drafts on the forums. The Sandbox exists for a reason.
Kinda hard to help me add to my article if you don't know what I've wrote isn't it? I figured it would be easiest to show what I have written instead of attempting to summarize it or have people pitch out additions without knowing what I have written already. I will take your advice and post it in the Sandbox though
Linking is good enough for others, it can work for you.
So it's basically Dora the Explorer's map with an evil attitude? It could work, but I'd cut down on the comical tone of the article (the map being snarky, leading to 999-J when asked to give directions to love etc.)
I'd suggest exploring the horror aspect more.