So here's my first SCP I think it needs more work, so please give your feedback. Also if its similar to any other SCP's i would like to know which one's so I can move away from them.
Grammar needs work, could sound more professional, and the redaction is a bit too vague.
How would you suggest making it sound more professional? I thought redactions were supposed to be vague to leave it up to the imagination (i can refine it though). Which Chunk's need Grammatical work?
The whole thing feels a wee bit too informal IMO, and though redactions should leave things up to the imagination, they should also be careful not to remove so much you could play Mad Libs with the missing pieces and make it something ridiculous.
Then again, I'm something of a noob myself; you might want to ask help of more experienced members.
Describe the measures being used to contain it. Is it a chain link fence patrolled by armed guards? Is it behind 3-meter high steel walls with big Jurassic Park style gates? Put those specifications in the Special Containment Procedures section.
Also, don't be afraid to invent a new site. Classifying the site of a safe-class object isn't as interesting as saying that it's being held at Research Site-27 for study.