The draft can be found here. —Photosynthetic
Please don't post SCP drafts in the forums. I've moved your draft to a Sandbox page; when soliciting feedback in the future, put the draft in the Sandbox (use the same page I just made for you) and link to it from the forums.
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You should put this in the sandbox instead of directly posting everything on the forum.
I think the cross-link between this and SCP-500 should go. If you want to keep SCP-1198-A (which I personally don't see any point in), think up of another way to have it form.
The beginning of the description before the stages seems confusing, as it seems like the second-to-last sentence is what should start off the description.