So, my new SCP is up on the site, and has been relatively well-received, but still needs some touching up. I'm worried about the complexity and about whether people 'get it.' Anyone want to take a stab at explaining it back to me? I want to make sure I'm communicating here.
I like the mystery of it, but I must admit the description is quite overwhelming and hard to get through. I must say though that the technical wording is well done.
Looks like a reference to jewish culture and in particular their messianic traditions concerning the "Lion of Judah"
I get the sense you are indicating this is a jewish temple containing their "messiah" but that apparently he failed in his attempts to save humanity?
So the veil is kept closed to prevent his presence from overwhelming us, and our corrupt presence from overwhelming him.
Am I getting warm?