So, I wrote this.Any feedback would be greatly appreciated.
I like it. I feel like there is something missing but I can't figure out what it is.
My only other comment would be a mention of the multiple helmets and clothing items that are already SCPs. Several of which have similar abilities. I can't remember for certain, but you might want to double check that your idea is unique.
Good job though the writing was good, and the mentioning of how he got this way was a good touch to add.
Well, I found no helmets that do the same thing. I don't recall seeing anything like this, but then again, I haven't read everything. I ask people in the chat if they remember something similar.