SCP Foundation

I actually enjoy this idea, including the absorbing of the kiddies. (That maybe be because I had an idea like it at one time) I think that it does need some cleaning up when it comes to tone and such though. Picture is nice and creepy. I think it could be swell.

I was snoring until the bit about "it was 'later'" Nice.

However until that point I wasn't interested at all. Perhaps I'm not getting it but I couldn't sense any significance to the suit, the man bonded to it, and "absorbing" children had so little mention that it didn't really affect me.

Unless its important I would suggest having the suit empty but animated. Expand the incident report if possible, and focus around this 'later' principle and any evidence found on the suit afterwards of where or what occurred.

"might 'scare the children'" was excellent. Can I just restate that the "it was 'later'" is awesome?

I would still like a couple details added to the incident, but that is up to you. Also there are a few places where the wording could be improved in the description and containment procedures. I don't have time for a detailed analysis currently, but I'll try to take a look later tonight.