I like this :) I have always been into the creepy fog type. This is going to be a good one. I would include a picture and ,aybe just maybe a video of walking into a dense patch of fog if you can.
This is horribly cliché. We already have a lot of mysterious fog-related artifacts, and the exploratory logs are just boringly predictable rather than interesting or horrifying. This has been done in much better ways.
I have to agree with Raven. Although the creepiness of fog is definitely SCP material, Fog has been done in several excellent ways so far making a new foray into this area tough.
If you want to stick with this you are going to have to find something interesting or unique beyond what has been done.
From reading this I imagine you wanted creepy fog and didn't put much thought into where this came from and why it does what it does. Even if these details don't often show up in SCP reports, the best SCP articles show clear evidence that the author knows the entire full story behind the scenes. I find when people explore behind the scenes details they often find inspiration that can make their ideas stand out.
This being said though, know that Raven is an expert at this and there are indeed quite a few fog-related items you need to stand out from. Do some research if you want to continue this idea.
Hey, thanks for tr advice guys. But I've done a rewrite (a rough one) in another post. I'm discontinuing this one since it's not very original. Take a look at the other and see if it's better!