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Item #: SCP-XXXX
Object Class: Keter
Special Containment Procedures: The containment area of SCP-XXXX is to be located in ███████, a minimum of 50km from inhabited areas. It is imperative that SCP-XXXX stay isolated from other Keter class SCP’s (especially 517-ARC, 682, and 847) because of this SCP-XXXX will be contained a minimum of 150km from the facilities containing other Keter class SCP’s. The subject will be kept in a 10m x 10m x 4m reinforced concrete room with minimum human interaction. Room is to be furnished with a bed, sink, toilet and all things necessary to sustain the life of an average human. All furniture items are to be bolted into the floor. Staff members are not allowed to enter the cell with any blade or bludgeon type weapon and absolutely no firearms. No one is allowed in the cell without at least 2 (two) class-D unarmed guards. The outside of the facility is to have no less than 6 (six) guards armed with ███████ ███████ (Speak to Foundation Armory for approved armaments), razor-wire fences electrified to no less than 120,000 volts and a minimum line of sight of 1km in every direction. Guards are to undergo brief psychiatric screening before duty, and are encouraged to keep a clear mind and positive attitude.
Description: SCP-XXXX-1 is a human male in his early twenties of German/Irish decent. Hair is brown and he has requested that it be shaved within a quarter inch of the scalp every two months if he remains under good behavior status [Request denied due to hostility.] Eyes are generally blue but can appear grey when under mental distress. In his normal form he stands 1.8m (5 feet 11 inches) tall and weighs 104kg (230 pounds) with broad shoulders. SCP-XXXX-1 has told us that his name is Dylan Stallings and has provided a social security number that matches that name. SCP-XXXX-1 has several tattoos most of which depict pin-up models, muscle cars, and monsters; Images he describes as “heavy metal” referring to his preference for loud, complex, rock music. After several tests it has been concluded that SCP-XXXX-1’s physiology is indistinguishable from that of a normal human and his IQ is average at best (115). The cause of his ability has yet to be determined.
SCP-XXXX-2 refers to the original subject in an alternate form. When within range of humanoids, animals, or other SCP’s who are experiencing anger, prejudice, resentment, or mistrust SCP-XXXX-1 picks up these specific brain waves and goes into a frenzy-like state of aggression. Most notable is the subject’s increase in physical size and strength during such episodes. SCP-XXXX-2 has never been properly measured due to its extremely aggressive nature, but was reported to be at its largest during the ███████ incident, where it was estimated to stand 3m (9 feet, 10 inches) tall and weigh 400kg (880 pounds) [see addendum XXXX-2-A for ███████ incident report] Testing has proven that the subject somehow senses and receives the anger and hate related brain waves of those around him and is capable of channeling these waves from multiple beings at once, as demonstrated in testing involving multiple [DATA EXPUNGED]. SCP-XXXX-1 requires reasonably high levels of these brain waves to elicit an effect; generally requiring the presence of 5-7 humans or medium sized animals in an angered mindset.
While in the enraged form, SCP-XXXX-2 is extremely resistant to injury, and has exhibited regenerative properties, healing from shots and stabs in a matter of minutes. As such, extreme trauma is required to subdue the subject and all forms of aggression must be removed from the immediate vicinity before the creature returns to a calm state. SCP-XXXX-1 is incapable of regenerating in human form but is always fully healed when he awakens from the shallow coma caused by transferring back from SCP-XXXX-2.
When observed in combat (in standard human form) SCP-XXXX-1 has proven a threat. There is no record of SCP-XXXX-1 having had any formal military training. The subject’s fighting style would most accurately be described as striking-based boxing with elements of Krav Maga (an Israeli defense system based on aggressive counter-attacks and quickly disabling the opponent.) Weapons of all kinds are strictly forbidden from the containment cell due to his propensity for disarming personnel; He has proven himself extremely deadly with firearms, and bludgeons such as clubs and pipes. Personnel who fail to adhere to this strict guideline will rarely require disciplinary action because the direct consequences are generally lethal. Guards are to work in unarmed groups to subdue SCP-XXXX-1; A protocol put in place after [DATA EXPUNGED].
While in its “rage enhanced” form SCP-XXXX-2 shows no lack of brain function but generally spends this time using extreme brute force over technical combat skill. While in SCP-XXXX-2 status, it is recommended to use sustained firepower and high-voltage steel-plated copper mesh to use as an electrical net to detain and transport the subject until it returns to human form.
It is thought that most of XXXX’s fighting experience was gathered in the years he spent preparing for what he thought would be an inevitable global catastrophe that he described as the “motherfuckin’ apocalypse.” Those types of statements prompted a psychiatric evaluation where it was revealed that the subject has multiple mental anxiety disorders, including acute paranoia, attention deficit disorder, and several signs of sociopathic tendencies. The subject is still unable to recall how or when his abilities began to form.
Recommend SCP-XXXX be detained indefinitely due to hostile nature and knowledge of the Foundation.
The following is an after-action report from D-████ on the events of ██-██-20██.
SCP involved: SCP-XXXX-2
Personnel involved: [DATA EXPUNGED]
Location: Containment facility in larned, ks
Document# XXX-XX: After-action Report of D-████
I was stationed at the ████████ facility in ██████, ██ tasked with guarding SCP-682. Around 0600 hours, we received a radio signal from the security checkpoint up the road from the main facility saying that an unidentified vehicle was approaching. There were no more radio transmissions for several minutes, and then we saw a silhouette cresting the hill from the east. We phoned the security checkpoint for an update and received no answer. They told me later that everyone at the checkpoint had [DATA EXPUNGED]. I grabbed my binoculars, looked down the road, and what I saw shocked me. It was a man coming down the road but he had to be 7 feet tall, coming toward the base at probably 25mph. We issued one verbal warning over the P.A. system, and fired several warning shots but it seemed to only increase the speed at which he came toward us. By the time he breached the first gate he was probably 10 feet tall and bashed through the second reinforced gate like he was jumping through a window. We opened fire but he ████ █ ███ before reinforcements arrived █ minutes later. By then he was ignoring me altogether, and was using pieces of the broken barricade to smash away at the blast door of the facility. We were finally able to subdue him with sustained fire from one of the mounted 7.62mm machine guns and drape him in the broken remnants of one of the electrified fences to pin him down until containment could be established.
When questioned about his attempted entrance of the facility SCP-XXXX-1 stated that he “felt the hate radiating from it, and just had to get in. People only make so much rage and whatever you’re keeping in there is made of so much… more.”
[Recommend adding telekill to the containment area of SCP-682 to avoid similar incidents.]