Allo. Nyehcat here. You may remember me as the guy who wrote that silly Chowderclef Vs. Batman story. Well, for my next story, I'm doing something a little more serious: a Mass Effect/SCP crossover. However, I'm not really that good at writing; as you may have noticed in my Chowderclef story, the writing was sorta choppy. So therefore, I'm looking for constructive criticism for what I have so far of the story. It can be found here in the fourth block.
I apologize if this is the wrong thread.