I've touched it up. I could have gone a thousand routes with it. Let me know what I can do. I would like to post. Is it worthy?
Its not ready to post.
Needs alot of cleanup and a bit of lengthening. Most of the lengthening can be done by taking things out of collapsibles, but each of the collapsible segments are also too short. The description is also outragously short. A colony of parasites living in a dead corpse deserve more than 5 sentences of description.
The interview is odd and doesn't make much sense. However I love the last line about the cold dark water and I think the interview is a good idea, but should be heavily reworked.
EDIT: I love the idea of a colony of parasites in a body though.
If you can't put it in a room and nothing bad will happen (without having to ship in peat) it's not safe. I'd classify the body as Euclid. Anything that's in the addendum that deals with what the body does and what makes it special should be put in the description.
EDIT: The Autopsy Log refers to the organisms within the boy as the SCP, and the description refers to the corpse as SCP, it doesn't even mention the bugs. You need to set all the nomenclature straight and flesh it out some more. This definitely has potential.