I was wondering if I could get some feedback? Please be as brutal as you like!
I do like the picture. Made me excited for the article but then…
Well there really wasn't much too it. Interesting effect, but so what. Its not creepy or dangerous or even that interesting on its own.
I imagine you could do much better.
SCPs don't have to be creepy and/or dangerous
Fair enough, maybe I shouldn't have worked from the picture backwards, which is a shame cos its a really good picture!
It's a drill music box? Huh… that's weird, but it doesn't really do anything for me the way it stands. Anomalous music box would be nice, and an infinite, angry drill would be nice. But together it's just a bit bland.