Okay, my photo of the sun is still being worked on, very slowly. But another idea that had been rattling in my brain needed to be written down right away before it slipped from my attention span. I was finally able to think of a way that might make it work after reading a recent tale which inspired me to finally get started on this.
So, there it is. Note that this is a first draft. The addenda and interview logs will eventually be put into collapsible blocks. And, yes, the recovery log and possibly the containment procedures might feel a bit half-assed, because they are. They were the last parts I worked on and it was already getting close to midnight. Need sleep badly.
And, if someone who's familiar with the technology of Ancient Sumer knows whether they were able to carve limestone back then, I'd appreciate if they could share that knowledge with me so that I could make that bit historically accurate.
But, mostly, I want to know… Does this flow well? Does everything make internal sense? Does it produce any kind of emotional response? A budding writer demands an answer!
Also, I'm not too fond of the name for the MTF. Suggestions are welcome.