Sorry to say that there's something like this in MCD's wiki (small as it is). It's something about Jack the Ripper's face that you see in a mirror and later he comes to rip you apart.
You may be able to sneak away with this though, both because I seem to be the only fcking person to read MCD's pages and because you could put enough degrees of separation into it.
As for the article I think you explain it too much, I wouldn't specify exactly what gets put into your eye, people are real sensitive about the eyes, I would state something like "We can see a speck of something in one of their eyes, and they report seeing strange things out of that eye" but that's my two cents. It's good apart from that.