I would like some feedback and help with this SCP. Is the concept considered good enough to start with?
Thanks in advance!
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There's not much really wrong with the article aside from a few tone issues and little bit of confusingness. What's really a problem is the idea is overdone. You've written about a portal to somewhere else, which isn't new or unique. The execution is pretty good, but not enough to make up for the blandness. Overall it kind of reads like the outline of what a Stargate is.
If you do decide to continue down this road, I would eliminate the reference to a nova class event, whatever that is. Also, the fact that it survives nuclear fusion, even though you said its indestructable, breaks my SoD.