SCP style is one of the few types of writing I've never done before, so anything you think should be added or fixed is greatly appreciated.
The SCP style is pretty difficult. I'm glad you're in here for feedback. If you need more feedback, you can also check out the realtime chat!
all effected civilians
This should be affected.
Generally, this SCP is an OTT and the concept is neither very interesting/original or played out in an interesting manner. I would downvote. The tone itself doesn't have many issues, but the concept is just boring and the execution plays it really straight.
Living the dream, or dreaming the life?
Fair enough. Airsoft is one of my other hobbies, so I figured I'd try and work it in. But I suppose a replica gun that occasionally acts like a real gun isn't particularly SCP-level.