Basically, I have trouble in achieving the tone and flow that readers like to have. May I get feedback if such article is worthy as an SCP report?
I was writing about a parasitic painting that uses a host to do its bidding, looking for female individuals to torture on and eventually gets sucked into the painting at a level of being tortured on.
I've been writing it too wrong that it looked like a narrative, I hope this one will go for the better.
I may also need help on proper formatting on external reports and recordings.