Here is the link: Danfiltz - Desire
I had this concept in my head way longer than I know this site. Originally it was intended for a short story but I never finished it. As I joined I thought that it might fit here as well, so I wrote it down and worked on it since. And now that I finally decided to introduce myself here the other day, I can finally ask for opinions.
I know the concept might be a bit weak and may be a little cliched too but maybe it works?
I don’t know. You tell me!
It is also a little short but in my opinion every sentence needs a purpose. For my first article, I don't want it to be bloated with unnecessary references and stuff that lets me look like a pretentious idiot. (Hope that I succeeded…)
Also, since I’m a non-native English-speaker, I might have picked up some expressions that usually aren't used in the way I used them. So it might be that some of the phrasing is a bit odd. Please ask if something is unclear.
As a little introduction and to see what the initial idea was, you might want to read this little text:
The "scheduled interview" is something I want to write in the future. It is intended to flesh out some of the things that I hinted at in the main article, like, why doesn't he want to have mirror-like objects in his cell or why didn't he resist while they retrieved him? Though at the moment it isn't needed and I don't want to write a big block of text only to discover that the article gets downvoted anyway (though looking at this post, I get the feeling, that it's already too late for that…). With that sentence at the end, I only want to commit myself to writing it when I get more experience.