Here it is: SCP-1252: Concreat. Comments? Also I'm not too sure how to post multiple sandboxes at once, if I need to. Help?
It seems very longwinded to me, not massively readable, and with not enough of a payoff to justify the effort of reading it.
You really need to clarify things, and slimline the descriptions.
I get by the title it is just a thing what eats people, so to me it comes off as extremely longwinded because of how simple the premise seems, but I may just have missed the hook.1