It's a little odd that you've posted these all at once and crowded the Recent Posts page with the same comment twelve times.
Date: 13 Aug 2012 18:10
Number of posts: 11
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Yay! My little next/previous thing has caught on! :D
"WELL FOUNDATION. YOU MADE IT SO EASY. SO VERY VERY EASY." - dimensionpotato
Upvoted because sincerely, if you can put this much effort in and it's bloody good writing, it's worth clicking the mouse.
EDIT: Bright downvoted! D:
I'm sorry, I can't do it.
There are too many errors in the writing of this series (almost entirely grammatical and stylistic, so they won't bother most spelling-conscious readers, but I care about grammar and style as well). To enjoy it, I'd need to correct them all, and there are just too many for me to do that — and to fix some would constitute more than minor edits.
I've cut out at about Part IV, and no-voted what I did read. If you ever want to clean this up, I could help you with part of it and then hopefully you can extrapolate the rest — if you even care, because very often when grammar/style issues like this are brought up, no one gives a shit, and that's their right — but for now… can't do it. This is just too long for that.
I have, however, upvoted the hub page, because I think the concept is pretty great, and I did enjoy what I read (just didn't upvote because of grammar/style issues). You should still feel good about this series, in my opinion! And anyone who doesn't notice or care about the issues I had should definitely read it to the end. And maybe I'll come back myself, who knows.