I just put my first SCP idea onto the sandbox (+ a supplemental for it)
(The supplemental has now been moved to below the main article on this page)
Could some people please read it and let me know what sucks, what is good, and how I can improve it?
Oh, and if you do read it, feel free to rip into it. Don't hold back, if something sucks please don't feel that you have to be nice about it.
I won't be able to be on this very often, so if I don't reply for a while, I'm not ignoring you and I'll reply as soon as I can.