Tried writing in a different sort of format.
As always, comments, criticism, critique, etc. all welcome and appreciated. Thanks for reading!
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As I said, this story made my crusty old heart feel bad for the poor bloke, which is not an easy thing to do. Good show.
Now that there are two tales about this, I suppose a third is relatively out of the question? Hahaha.
Living the dream, or dreaming the life?
That is so sad. Nice job, most tales do not have an impact on me. Upvoted.
This is excellent. I like how you built up that relationship without any dialogue, only monologue, yet, when it was cut off, it felt like a real, tangible heartbreak. Upvote get.