This will be my first SCP article and I am very excited about it. I would like some feedback on it before I publish. Specifically, I need help choosing where the object should be stored. Otherwise, general criticism is welcome.
The idea seems too close to SCP-055 to me, and the addenda don't do much for the article; Addendum C is entirely unnecessary, as labeling things in that fashion is standard as far as I know, and the experiment where the doctor gets brain damage from reading the documents doesn't fit with the rest of the article. For ideas on storage, this list is a useful reference.
Thank you for your input :). I see the resemblance to SCP-055 which is something I will have to work on. Having read SCP-055, I can see the resemblance but that's not what I was going for. Clearly, I'll have to spend some time clarifiying my ideas. Also I will work on "trimming the fat." I'll get to revising soon.
Good tone, but I'm sorry, I really think you might want to scrap the idea altogether and start from something new.
This is almost literally a mashup between 055 and 988, both of which are long standing and rather high rated SCPs written by vets on the site, so you're going to have to be able to pull over something pretty spectacular to impress. I'm not saying that it's not feasible, just that it might not be the first project that you want to tackle. Try reading some more SCPs to know what's out there, and work on a lot of different things at a time to get the juices flowing. I know I didn't even bother starting out in the sandbox before I read the first thousand SCPs, and I still take regular breaks and scour the comments and the forums.