I put a lot of work into this one so I hope it does alright. It's the second drop-down called "Warehouse"
First, the description is a bit too… descriptive. This may be my tendency to bluntness, but it's just a warehouse. It isn't neccessary to go into too much detail. Also, 'adorns' isn't clinical.
Next, too similar to 087 or 082 or something. The Staircases, with 300 or so upvotes. Better than anything you could do, not to crush your hopes or anything.
Don't try posting.
Ok, well say I make it less descriptive and remove "adorns", what do you think I could do to it to make it different to 087 and 082?
I've scrapped previous ideas if they didn't work right away, but I'm determined to make this one work, even if it means big changes.
Nothing. The idea itself is too generic.
Thanks for the critique anyway.
I guess I'm just one of those people who can't write good SCP's.