A little while ago, I put up an SCP on the wiki… I didn't wait to get proper feedback from the forums beforehand so I wasn't able to fix some of the glaring errors in my entry.
I've revised the SCP quite a bit over the last few days and want to get some feedback on the revisions… and this time I will make sure it is done properly before even thinking about posting it.
- Removed gratuitous cross-references with other SCP's
- Gave it a costly downside to discourage use
- Fixed many formatting issues
- Took out some confusing/annoying/conflicting parts from the first draft.
I wasn't quite sure how to write up the last part. I wanted to display the dangerous properties of the SCP, but I know some people (including myself) don't like long testing logs. I wrote it up in paragraph form as well as in testing log form to see which is better in this case.
Let me know what you think: SCP