Hey guys, this is my first tale, and I feel it's lacking something. If you need background information, it takes place during Game Day Phase 2 (although, having been told that phase is over, I may just submit this as a standalone tale upon its completion).
It's an idea about the intersection of SCP's-469, -217, -808, and the Church that I found I particularly liked, but I could use some help fleshing it out more. 469 had a some extra interpretation about features not mentioned in its report that I took the liberty of trying to describe but please tell me if it just doesn't work. If you have criticisms, comments on my style and structuring, or just anything overall, it would be greatly appreciated.