Okay, so I've got a concept regarding floating fruit. But I can't seem to get a narrative from it. In short, A monkey from a NASA experiment has survived an explosion in earths orbit and is presumed dead. The monkey gains the ability to conjure fruit around the area, and does this to survive. However, he occasionally misses, and groups of fruit end up in a Foundation Space Station. The fruit seem to give individuals that consume them an ability to reverse their relationship with earth's gravity, and will begin to float until they succumb to asphyxiation
I've been told that this concept is not full enough to have a narrative. I wanna know your guys thoughts.