Hello! I'm pretty happy with how this turned out, but do have two unresolved concerns I'll put right out in front in the hopes of feedback from more experienced authors.
1) It feels a little long. I'd be happy to shorten it but I'm not sure where.
2) I'm torn on whether to include a photo, and if so, what. Two options in my mind are <picture of SCP-1267> (boring) or a picture of the aftermath of a metamorphosis (too unnecessarily gory?).