SCP Foundation

(I'm sorry I if come across as insulting, that is not my intention)

Whoa whoa whoa…whoa

You can not post something like this on the main site as it would get down-voted off almost instantly. Your tone on most of the article is horrible; this is a government document, not a fantasy novel. Secondly, the way both the doctor and the SCP talk to each other is just awful. Again, these people working here are supposed to be professionals and wouldn't be getting this personally involved with any SCP like this. Thirdly, and this goes back to the first point, a document of this nature is a finalization of all information recorded and therefore adding revisions like you did does not make logical sense.

Have you read the guide on how to write an SCP? That should greatly help you on you endeavors for this article.

I hope this critique finds you will and you have a nice rest of your day.

The best thing I can tell is to never make it where you humanoid SCP has somehow "bested" the foundation. The reason being is that every researcher at the foundation is at the very least a genius and with how many people work for the foundation and what things they currently have contained, being shown up by what appears to be some smug jackass will not look good lol.