Sad little Foundation tale
Tell me what you'll think.
The writing itself isn't bad, but the idea is bland as hell.
Just the whole idea of the article, or specific parts?
The writing itself (grammar, flow, etc) isn't bad, but the whole story was just boring. I have no idea what you were trying to do.
-He is old and sad and responsible for Telekill
-His wife died and he designed a flawed containment cell
-Somehow 173 kills him randomly
There's literally no plot.