SCP Foundation

Been working on this for a few days now, I think it's ready for some feedback. Thank you in advance for noticing things I did not, or helping me further develop this SCP more then I could think of.

A link to The Man In The Cabin; http://scp-sandbox-3.wikidot.com/the-man-in-the-cabin-by:guavity

I moved your thread summary content to the first post and trimmed it above, OP, since it was taking up a lot of space on the forum listing. Try to keep thread descriptions under 7 lines so you don't visually crowd out other people's threads. ~Zyn

Overall I like the concept, especially the idea of a creature that predicts deaths but still mourns the victims. Something about the idea of a tumorous shell of a man alone in a cabin weeping for people it knows will die is unsettling in the perfect SCP way. I've listed some problems I've had but this I think with revision this could be a solid SCP.

- "Any spores exceeding the perimeter of the 12 meter mark, is to be immediately" spores should be singular or replace "is" with "are"
- "kept a distance away" please specify a distance, it feels un-foundation-ey to leave it vague
- "It is only to be removed if a test subject is entering, samples of SCP-XXXX, are strictly forbidden to be taken directly from the cabin." This sentence was really confusing, was the first comma supposed to be a period?
- "If the four man team is to be compromised" this should probably just say "If the four man team is compromised"
- "This virus however seems to carry" there's no reason to say "however" here. Also personally I think the sentence should just say "the virus carry's…" but that's just opinion
- "It’s influence over the time has appeared" This should be either "over time has appeared" or "over the time it has appeared"
- "traceable to large happenings within its lifespan." I would replace happening with events
- "This virus, however, has a large influence" however=but, there is no reason to say but here
- "suitanim of 'Cabin Boy'" if suitanim means alternate name then it is spelled pseudonym, also it seems more in line with foundation lore to name Cabin Boy something like SCP-XXXX-1
- "They believe it is growing and eliminating tumors due to the amount of genes the virus carries." To be blunt: this doesn't make sense. You could say something like "cells infected with the viral RNA of SCP-XXXX gain the ability to increase the rate of cell division and apoptosis allowing for controlled forming and removal of tumors" or you could just cut this line down to "They believe it is growing and eliminating tumors"
- "However these deaths are" again, you don't need to say However here
- lastly, what happens if SCP-XXXX death reports are used to try and prevent deaths?

I need to stop because of need for sleep so I'll leave you with these