SCP Foundation

I felt that a big criticism I've received are that scps that only create malicious outcomes are by far too many and lack creative voice.

I'll come right out and say it since the writing focuses heavily on bad outcomes. I came away thinking that its a you look at it and you die SCP. That's boring. The fish and the reference to 'testicular damage' is a bit left field. Since the 'sense of dread' immediately places the readers expectations for the object. Those expectations are then settled by the named examples of people who view the SCP.

Edit: As for my twist suggestion. I said it because most stories play around with fate, prophecies, and other predetermined outcomes. Mostly prevent a linear plot that an audience can predict. I suggested bargaining, because it adds interactivity to the SCP.